The article in Monday's Arizona Daily Wildcat ("Titles for UA, Keino") is an example of something all too common lately Ä poor writing and poor editing. Specifically, neither the headline nor the first TWO paragraphs communicates a very important fact Ä namely, what sport is being referred to! It is not until the third paragraph of the article that the reader discovers this article is about a track meet.
I would encourage of the Wildcat staff to think about these sorts of things; perhaps a review of basic journalism would help. Of course, with the journalism department being cut, I guess we're all out of luck.
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