'Wildcat' has poor writing, editing

Editor:

The article in Monday's Arizona Daily Wildcat ("Titles for UA, Keino") is an example of something all too common lately poor writing and poor editing. Specifically, neither the headline nor the first TWO paragraphs communicates a very important fact namely, what sport is being referred to! It is not until the third paragraph of the article that the reader discovers this article is about a track meet.

I would encourage of the Wildcat staff to think about these sorts of things; perhaps a review of basic journalism would help. Of course, with the journalism department being cut, I guess we're all out of luck.

Gordon Zaft

NDS grad student in

Electrical and Computer Engineering

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